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The Scottish Castle: Jorge Akira's Story

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The Scottish Castle: Jorge Akira's Story er en engelsk-opgave til 10. klasse, afleveret til karakteren 12. Fylder 2 sider (633 ord, ca. 3 min. læsning) og blev publiceret 3. november 2015.

En narrativ historie centreret om den 15-årige Jorge Akira, der findes dømt for mord efter en voldelig strid med sin bror Gilmer i deres skotske slotshjem. Historien beskriver Jorges flugt og hans efterfølgende liv i skjul, og udforsker temaer som skyld, familiehemmeligheder og konsekvenserne af impulsive handlinger. Den introducerer også familiens historie og en betydelig opfindelse af Jorges far, William Akira.

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En velstruktureret narrativ historie med en spændende plot og karakterudvikling. God som inspiration til kreativ skrivning.
Struktur
10
Faglig dybde
10
Kilder
12
Fuldstændighed
10
  • familiekonflikt
  • flugt
  • jorge akira
  • kreativ skrivning
  • mord
  • narrativ
  • skotsk slot
  • skyld

“Dad, I am home”. He was sitting at the edge of the steep roof, just over the balcony into his room. Thinking about what mistakes he had done in life. Jorge Akira, 15 years old, convicted for murder, only child. At the roof, Jorge had a spacious view over the beautiful hills, and the only thing he had in thoughts was, “my life is going downhill”. The guards pounded angrily on Jorge’s door, so the door creaked on its hinges. The Scottish general Angus, who has unsuccessfully tried to capture Jorge for about 4 months, puffed contentedly on his pipe, the doors impingement with the floor made so that they only had a lack of vision because of the big dust could. Four armed guards stormed towards the old balcony. Jorge heard the sound of heavy boots hitting against the wooden planks.

About 4 months earlier…

Jorge, 15 years old, the parents little darling, younger brother. It was Wednesday, the sun was glowing red and the birds where singing. The beautiful castle, which was amazing to live in standing there, in the shadow of the great hills. Was built by William Akira’s great-great-great-grandmother Esperenza Akira, who was the former crown princess of Scotland. William Akira has created a new invention; he was a professor, Just like the last ten generations of his family. William, who rarely shows his emotions, kept singing and smiling. Because he knew, that this was going to be the biggest invention of the Scottish history. Many people thinks that the report of Williams’s wealth has been grossly exaggerated, but after this invention, no one will ever doubt his richness. However, inside Gilmer’s room not everything was as perfect. Jorge and Gilmer where arguing whether to go for the cobber marked, or stay home and play. Jorge, who was very stubborn, because he liked the sound of the bagpipes, and the lovely smell that emerged from the food stalls. However, Gilmer is increasingly difficult to satisfy and sometimes he could become very physically abusive. Both Gilmer and Jorge have a sense of violent temper, and they ended up in a fight. Jorge, who was younger but stronger, grabbed a book and knocked down his older brother. Gilmer was laying down unconscious; he was being choked in his own tongue. The younger brother, who could do nothing else than look at the dying brother, started to feel a sense of guilt. Nevertheless, what he did not know was that the house cleaner has seen everything. Jorge, who was shaking ran out the front door, just to see his parents returning from the marked. He jumped over the stone fence, and ran towards the chute and threw himself into it. Inside the chute, was a foul and pervasive smell of garbage. Jorge lived there for several of months, eating half-rotten meat and drinking the blood from dead rats. Until one day when Jorge realized, that you have to face your problems. Therefore, he crawled up the dusty chute filled with cobweb, into the beautiful garden. It was in the early morning, so the sunshine made it difficult, for a person who has not seen sunlight in months, to see. He walked through the open front door, and into the living room. The silk curtains where drawn, so you could only see daylight in a narrow slit between the curtains. He walked up the spiral staircase, which was decorated with beautiful ornaments. Into his dusty bedroom, it was obvious that the house cleaner have not been here for a long time. Out, at the balcony the view was amazing this time at the day. You could see miles away. Jorge jumped up at the steep roof, at his favorite spot, and started daydreaming. Until he yelled, “Dad, I am home”.

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