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The Day I Saw Him

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The Day I Saw Him er en engelsk-opgave til 1.g el. lign., afleveret til karakteren 12. Fylder 3 sider (1.464 ord, ca. 6 min. læsning) og blev publiceret 29. marts 2015.

En førstepersonsfortælling der beskriver en togrejse til en convention i København. Hovedpersonen oplever et pinligt møde med en togkonduktør og et magisk møde med en dreng, der bærer et lyserødt bandana. Historien udforsker temaer som forelskelse og uventede forbindelser.

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  • convention
  • copenhagen
  • creative writing
  • first-person
  • infatuation
  • narrative
  • romance
  • teenager
  • train journey

It was time for me to finally board the train with my friend and travel to a big convention in Copenhagen.I faintly smiled, and placed my hand on my chest. The pale rays of sunlight had warmed my t-shirt, and my white cheeks reflected like a mirror. Oh, how lovely spring is. I laid on one of the lightly heated platforms on the train station, and looked up into the cyan blue sky, gently touched by a few white clouds. We got up on our feet as the train arrived. It was quite a busy day, so we didn’t expect to find any seats. A crowd of people drove me away from my friend, and I now found myself unable to see where she went.

The matte metal doors sprung up, and a wave of impatient people burst down the train stairs, and continued to walk down the platforms. I was just about to board the train, as my left eye caught the sight of this shadow that boarded the train from the other end. It was a boy, around my age. I only had the opportunity to gaze upon for a few seconds, but I instantly noticed something about him: he was wearing a bright-red headband, just below the hairline to his beautiful blonde locks. “Who wears a headband besides me these days?” I thought to myself. The crowd behind me almost lifted me aboard the train, that’s how impatient everyone was these days. Such a shame. They don’t even notice the beauties of the early spring weather.

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