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Samantha Landons flaskepost om mobning og tragedie

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Samantha Landons flaskepost om mobning og tragedie er en engelsk-opgave til 8. klasse, afleveret til karakteren 12. Fylder 2 sider (491 ord, ca. 2 min. læsning) og blev publiceret 25. november 2015.

Denne flaskepost fra Samantha Landon, en 18-årig studerende, fortæller en gribende historie om mobning og dens ødelæggende følger. Hun beskriver sin desperation, der førte til en hævnaktion mod sine plageånder, og den uventede, tragiske udgang. Brevet er et sidste vidnesbyrd om hendes smerte og et ønske om, at sandheden kommer frem.

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To the person who finds this bottle: I am so glad that you have found my message.

First, let me present myself. I am [NAVN A], an 18-year-old student from Bar Harbor. I am writing this message because of an experiment, I made at my school. Actually, it was not an experiment.

I am being bullied in school because of my deformed leg, and I am so sad. There are a couple of girls that bully me, and they have bullied me as long as I remember. They push me around, break my things and tear my books apart. Then I decided to take action.

Luckily, I am good friends with our chemistry teacher, so one day I asked him if I could stay a little longer, and study some chemistry. He said yes, just as I expected, and my plan could begin.

I had read a lot about this stuff online, how to make a simple bomb. The bomb was not supposed to do any permanent damage, I only created it to scare the girls that bully me, to stop them from bullying me.

The day after I came to school very early, to place the bomb in their lockers. Everything went fine, and we had our first class without anything happening. Then, in the recess, the girls had to get some books, and when one of the girls opened her locker, the bomb exploded. It was far more effective than I could ever dream about. Everyone was terrified, people screamed, and ran away. I walked over to the girl, whose locker was exploded. I could see it from a distance, she was dead. Something was destroyed inside me, this was not meant to happen, what had I done? I ran, ran as fast as I could. I ran home, threw myself in the bed and just cried. I cried so long, I just could not stop.

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