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My brother and Big Ben: A story of bad influence

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My brother and Big Ben: A story of bad influence er en engelsk-opgave, afleveret til karakteren 10. Fylder 2 sider (513 ord, ca. 2 min. læsning) og blev publiceret 23. juli 2010.

Denne personlige fortælling beskriver en yngre søskendes bekymring for sin storebror, der falder ind under dårlig indflydelse fra en bølle ved navn 'Big Ben'. Broren begynder at stjæle og male graffiti, hvilket skaber en dyb familiekonflikt. Historien kulminerer med politiets indblanding og faderens konfrontation med sønnen.

Redaktørens vurdering
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En personlig fortælling om dårlig indflydelse og familiekonflikt. Historien er velstruktureret og har et klart budskab, selvom sproget har visse grammatiske fejl.
Struktur
10
Faglig dybde
7
Kilder
12
Fuldstændighed
10
  • bad influence
  • delinquency
  • family conflict
  • graffiti
  • peer pressure
  • school life
  • sibling relationship
  • stealing
  • youth crime

And I knew a very good way, to get him back on track again. My brother is just went into 16 years. He had started to go around with the biggest jerk in the whole school!. He was nothing else than trouble. His name was Ben Olson, or “Big Ben” which he also got called. He is about 2 meters tall, and weighs about 100 kilograms. He lives in a big house, 2 blocks away from our house.

In school “Big Ben” is a tough banana. If pupils are preventing him, they get there “ass kicked”. All students have a great respect for him. I don’t know why he will be friends with my brother. But I have a clue, Maybe it is because my brother is the best at soccer in the whole school. Or maybe it is because my brother has a lot of girlfriends? But it is still an enigma for me.

Ben Olson also has a lot of followers, like any other school. It is just like in an American school movie. Where there is a “Bad guy” with a lot of friends, and money, and beat people up for their lunch money. I couldn´t understand what all the girls see in him. He is a stupid fat jerk, who makes a lot of trouble. But girls are sexually related to guys like him, How silly!.

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