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Back on track

  • Engelsk
  • 10. klasse
  • Afleveret til 7
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Back on track er en engelsk-opgave til 10. klasse, afleveret til karakteren 7. Fylder 1 side (516 ord, ca. 2 min. læsning) og blev publiceret 2. april 2013.

Denne narrative opgave handler om en 14-årig, der bemærker en ændring i forholdet til sin 17-årige bror. Da broren begynder at opføre sig mistænkeligt, opdager fortælleren, at broren er involveret i narkohandel. Fortælleren udtænker en snedig plan for at konfrontere broren og hjælpe ham ud af kriminalitet, hvilket fører til en positiv forandring for hele familien.

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En komplet og sammenhængende fortælling med en klar handling og et budskab. Trods sproglige fejl er historien let at følge og kan inspirere andre elever til kreativ skrivning.
Struktur
10
Faglig dybde
7
Kilder
10
Fuldstændighed
12
  • ansvar
  • familieforhold
  • fortælling
  • kriminalitet
  • narkohandel
  • online spil
  • søskende
  • ungdom

Me and my brother have a good relationship, when we were children. We helped each other and played a lot together. Now I’m 14 and my brother is 17. We don’t have a relationship, as good as when we were children. He likes to sit in front of his computer, and I like work out. My big brother plays a lot of online games and meet a lot of strangers. My father isn’t glad, for him talking with people doesn’t know, and my mother doesn’t care. One day I overheard a conversation of my brother, he was talking about getting together with someone. The same night we were home alone, and he said he would go and rent a movie. But I took hours, 2 hours later he came home. He said that there were a long line, but I didn’t believe him. A few weeks later he went out again, and this time I followed him. I was hiding behind trees, bushes and mailboxes. When we got downtown, he walked into a dark alley, and the in a back door of a restaurant. I creep to the nearest window by the kitchen. To find out, what he was doing. It was not easy to look in at the window, but I my brother and an Asian man. My brother got a package from the Asian man, and then my brother went home with me behind him. I took a faster way home so he didn’t think that I followed him. I would not tell my parents what I have seen, maybe they would be worried. I would keep it between me and my brother, so I asked him, what he was doing there. He said that he was asking for a job, but he didn’t mention the package. But I didn’t believe his story. So one day I made an account in the same game as my brother play, so he maybe would tell me about his secret. This was step one in my plan, step two is to add him as my friend, so he would trust me. Step three was to hear about his secret.

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