Engelsk stil

Denne opgave er en stil om My Gap Year hvilket er en stil jeg har lavet under eksamen og efterfølgende har fået 10 for og føler jeg vil del den med jer da jeg ved hvor svært folk kan have det med engelsk her er et udtag fra teksten': I’m a Danish guy and i’m finishing my last year of school this year, and i’m working as an mechanic at a Machine pool where i’m fixing the machines, but also in as a reserve in the high seasons in the harvest, and i would really like to have my next as a gap year where i go to the US to work for another Machine pool and have some experience with some bigger machines and larger areas so when i’m coming back from the gap year, I have some more experience and then can start my own Machine pool with a better service than many others thanks to the extra experience. Now a bit about myself: I am 17 years old and i’m a fresh “little” guy with lots of ideas to do things faster and better, in probably any company. I grew up in a little town in North Jutland, where i lived next to a Machine pool and a few smaller farming industries. I started working on a farm in the age of 12 and in a age of 16 i started working on a machine pool. The day today i’m working on the same machine pool and i’m living a bit bigger city than then cause of school and friends but now when i’m finishing school this year i hope to get this gap year and then can move back to the little city i originally came from, cause then i can have my own cause there is the space for the needed machinery and the farms for the contracts, and it’s right in the middle of the town I live in now and the next big town, more south so i can make some more and bigger contracts with the city council, where the jobs would be sweeping of parking lots and plowing snow in the winter. I’m in Primary School right now and i’m finishing it here in June, where i’m going on to a school for machine operators so i can be a mechanic and a driver for the machines and yes i know i said that i was in as a reserve, and yes I am but i want to be a permanent driver where i’m a mechanic when I am coming in from the fields.