Det jeg kan gøre det bedre for min næste aflevering, er at passe på med hvordan jeg sætter kommaer og punktumer.
Many people travel with their lovers to discover the world and to have some exactness in their relationship. On the other hand, they get the chance to discover each other, and that would turn into a thrilling adventure. That is exactly what happened with Jordan and the “new” Elizabeth, who are two strangers that decide to travel together. Jordan and Elizabeth broke up; therefore, he is searching for a new Elizabeth. He had planned a month-long trip for him and his girlfriend Elizabeth. Elizabeth decides to break up with him before the journey begins. He started searching for a girl who had the same name as his ex because he got the tickets on a discount and couldn’t refund, and they were also non-transferable.
He wrote an advert on social media site Reddit. The site was used by many Canadians and that helped him find the “new” Elizabeth very quickly. That tells us that he is a strong man who does what is good for himself. He did not want to miss it just because of his ex. The writer appealed to an informal writing style. He used short sentences and that made the article very simple and easy to understand, but at the same time he tries to write it with animation, so the reader doesn’t lose their interest. The receivers may be young people who would be interested in reading articles that are easy and exciting at the same time. He writes directly what is happening with Jordan and Elizabeth and doesn’t keep a space where the reader has to use energy on understanding what he means. In the end, we hear that he chose to create a charity to help survivors of abuse, cancer, and warfare who can’t afford to see the world. He called it “Ticket Forward” that shows us that he is a very good person who did a good deed. His intention with this article is to show that we always have to help or give something when we have the opportunity, and never cut our dreams off because of anyone.
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